Letter and Image Revision and Final of Part 1

I like a good critique because I always to get better at my work. When I hear feedback from my peers I do take it and apply what will work for my pieces. So with this assignment I wanted to really show a difference from what I started out with and produce something that would depict theme I am going for: Rhythm!

So here's what I came up with:

 

Now it's time to figure out the text!